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Home liliana_negoi effect - senryu
2008.11.19 19:00:53
liliana_negoi

crazy butterflies
caress my heart every day
in search of your words...


  
 

 
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Cordell
2008.11.19 22:15:09

Hey NO FAIR. Haikus are suppose to be about nature not love. Your cheating. And dont think Im not going to google "Senryu" to find out that that is.

Butterflies caressing your hear is a wonderful idea through

 
 
 
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Cordell
2008.11.19 22:39:19

It seems to me that every poem you write is powerful and beautiful, when i write little poems they just seem like stupid little poems.

 
 
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